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LINE GRAPH AND TABLE COMPARISON OF YEARLY EXPORTS

LINE GRAPH AND TABLE COMPARISON OF YEARLY EXPORTS QVQOK

The line graph illustrates the export value in USD billions, of a country from 2015 to 2016, while the table represents the average proportionate The bar graph illustrates the revenue generated in billion dollars through exports in different products in two consecutive years from 2015 to 2016, while the table represents the average differences of 5 exported items of the same period as above. Overall, the most exported product which earned more gain was the Petroleum-based items in 2015 and the textiles being the least earned as opposed to 2016 both petroleum-based and engineering products were more popular. However, both years showed a closer level in generation sales with a lesser gap in between, besides agri-commodities indicated a very minor gap almost an equal percentage of revenues in both years. In 2015, the fuel-based categories accounted for 60 billion dollars which is just over 3% higher in the following year. The next majority proportion comprised nearly 58 billion in engineering goods exportation of which the difference in 2016 was an 8. 5 % increase in comparison with the previous. Meanwhile, although farming products appeared to be the same in both years, there is a variation of 0. 81% compared to the year 2016. The most significant figure in 2015 was gems and jewelry items of which being the only highest revenue builder of the year recorded as around 42 billion dollars whereas a 5. 18% increase from the following year. with regards to the table figure of both years, the most difference in sales valuation being textiles of 15. 24% and the second-highest was engineering products of 8. 5% and the third comprised by petroleum items in contrast to 0. 81% variation in exported products of agriculture commodities.

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