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Life Cycle of Plastic Bottles

Life Cycle of Plastic Bottles Mr1AN
The diagram is about the life cycle of plastic bottles, it shows how bottles are made from zero and what happens after they fulfill their purpose. First it is needed to harvest the cereal, after that being made the next step is to process the plant. Extraction of glucose is made to the harvested cereals obtained before. Once the glucose is obtained, its function is to be used as a ferment for polymers. Then, these polymers would become plastic bottles. Bottles are used for different purposes by countless industries, companies and individuals. Once they have served their primary purpose, they are discarded in the trash. After ending up in the trash, and depending on the treatment given to them, they end up being recycled or thrown away for good.
The diagram is about the life cycle of plastic bottles, it
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shows
how bottles
are made
from zero and what happens after they fulfill their purpose.

First
it
is needed
to harvest the cereal, after that
being made
the
next
step is to process the plant. Extraction of glucose
is made
to the harvested cereals obtained
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before
. Once the glucose
is obtained
, its function is to be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as a ferment for polymers. Then, these polymers would become plastic bottles.

Bottles are
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used
for
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different
purposes by countless industries,
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companies
and individuals. Once they have served their primary purpose, they
are discarded
in the trash. After ending up in the trash, and depending on the treatment
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given
to them, they
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end
up
being recycled
or thrown away for
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good
.
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IELTS academic Life Cycle of Plastic Bottles

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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