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The trend of vehicle traffic in metro,in millions,for all the 12 months of the years.

The trend of vehicle traffic in metro, in millions, for all the 12 months of the years. p1aya
The line graph illustrate the figure of vehicle traffic in metro for all the 12 months of the years. Units measured in million. With regards, the figure of vehicle traffic used it began with 300 million. After that peaked at 350 million in Feburary. Further the figure fell dramatically and stopped at 150 million in April. In May the ratio of vehicle traffic esclated near about 400 million. Probing Further, after May amount vehicle traffic slightly fluctuated and stopped at 300 million in December. Overall, it can been seen that in initial year only 300 million of vehicle traffic in metro. In between of year trend line fluctuated and end of month reached at same in 300 million.
The line graph illustrate the figure of
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in metro for all the 12 months of the years. Units measured in
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million
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in April. In May the ratio of
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esclated
near about 400
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slightly
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stopped
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in December.
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300
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in metro. In between of year trend line fluctuated and
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IELTS academic The trend of vehicle traffic in metro, in millions, for all the 12 months of the years.

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