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The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. gYJxA
The bar chart illustrates the total number of seals, whales and dolphins accounted in Gormez straits from 2006 to 2018. Overall, The dolphins are the highest percentage as compare to seals and whales. According to the chart in 2006, The seales accounted for 42 percent while the whales stood around 23 percent and dolphins around 18 percent. After 4 years, the seales saw a decline of 22 percent, and the whale rose to 21 percent. meanwhile, The dolphins rose to 21 percent. In 2014, The seals grew to 34 percent. while the whale is dropped to 21 percent and the dolphins grew to 32 percent. At the end of 2018, The seals rose to 44 percent and The whale rose to 28 percent. Meanwhile, the dolphins rose to the peak at around 51 percent. Throughout the years, The seals dominated over the whales and dolphins
The bar chart illustrates the total number of
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,
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and dolphins accounted in
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straits from 2006 to 2018.
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, The dolphins are the highest percentage as compare to
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seals
and
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. According to the chart in 2006, The
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seales
accounted for 42
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while the
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stood around 23
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and dolphins around 18
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. After 4 years, the
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seales
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a decline of 22
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, and the
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whale
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rose
to 21
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.
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meanwhile
, The dolphins
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to 21
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. In 2014, The
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grew to 34
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.
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while
the
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is dropped
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and the dolphins grew to 32
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. At the
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end
of 2018, The
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rose
to 44
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and The
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whale
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to 28
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. Meanwhile, the dolphins
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to the peak at around 51
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. Throughout the years, The
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dominated over the
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dolphins

IELTS academic The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

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