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Keep animals in zoos agree or disagree

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Some people think that zoos are needed nowadays, while others suggest that natural habitat cannot be compared with zoos. This essay examines this question from both points of view and then I will give my own respective on the matter. Those who agree with the view that zoos important provide a number of points in favour of their point of view. Firstly, zoos provide animals with home and food. Secondly, they can help to protect endangered species from poaching and other hazards. Moreover, Zoos also help to increase population of declining species. Animals always be under medical supervision, if they get any injuries veterinarians help them. Finally, zoos allows scientists to study animals and their behavior. However, those who disagree with the above mentioned opinion present their own respective reason as well. Zoos exhibit animals with the aim of making money. Also, accommodation for living artificial and creatures can not live unselfconscious. They are kept in cages and have limited space, they lose the freedom to hunt for food. Animals lifetime is short in zoos, because their life boring and alone. Some zoos sold endangered animals as food and fur for coat. In my opinion both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I tend to believe that zoos not so bad because animals live safely and they need not to hunt for food and fight for survival.

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 to protect endangered species from poaching and other hazards. Moreover
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 to increase population of declining species. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
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 and their behavior.

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 respective reason as well
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 and fur for coat.

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animals
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live
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 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 and fight for survival. 