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crime rate from 1978 to 2000 in the us

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The line chart indicates an overview of the violent crime rate over the period of 22 years starting from 1978. From 1978 to 1988 we can see a gradual increase which reaches its climax in 1988 with a solid 4. 5 offenses with only around 2. 2 of them being reported to the police. Out of 2. 2 offenses being reported less than 0. 5 of the offenders ended up getting arrested. The line chart shows a significant drop in crime rate after 1988 with a higher rate of the crimes being reported and eventually arrested by the police. It is clear that the rate of the crimes being recorded and controlled by the police gradually increased within the period of 22 years. Resulting in a significantly lower number of offenses in 2000. The crime being reported to the police remained steady for 10 years between 1978 to 1988 but started its downfall to a mere 1. 5 in 2000. It would seem that serious violent crimes are headed towards a lower trend of crime.
The line chart indicates an overview of the violent
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crime
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over the period of 22 years starting from 1978.

From 1978 to 1988 we can
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a gradual increase which reaches its climax in 1988 with a solid 4. 5 offenses with
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only
around 2. 2 of them being
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reported
to the
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police
. Out of 2. 2 offenses being
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reported
less than 0. 5 of the offenders ended up getting arrested. The line chart
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shows
a significant drop in
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crime
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after 1988 with a higher
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rate
of the
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crimes
being
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reported
and
eventually
arrested by the
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police
. It is
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clear
that the
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rate
of the
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crimes
being recorded
and controlled by the
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police
gradually
increased within the period of 22 years. Resulting in a
significantly
lower number of offenses in 2000. The
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being
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reported
to the
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remained steady for 10 years
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between 1978 to 1988
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started
its downfall to a mere 1. 5 in 2000.

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crimes
are headed
towards a lower trend of
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crime
.

IELTS academic crime rate from 1978 to 2000 in the us

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