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The map illustrates data of two parts of the map S1 and S2. In which a newly introduce shopping mall have been decided to build. Firstly, a railway line is crossed from the centre of the both area. The north side of map is totally covered with housing estate. The golf course and park is placed on the left side of the track. The river is flowing through the both sites. In S2 the mall in future will engage directly to society. Th road is starting from S1 through the mid of commercial area and passing over the bridge. Furthermore, right side of S1 the industrial market is situated.
The map illustrates data of two parts of the map S1 and S2. In which a
newly
introduce shopping mall have
been decided
to build.
Firstly
, a railway line
is crossed
from the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
of the both area. The north side of map is
totally
covered with housing estate. The golf course and park
is placed
on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
river is flowing through the both sites. In S2 the mall in future will engage
directly
to society.
Make sure that 'Th' is the chemical symbol for thorium, and not a typing error. Did you mean "The"?
Th
road is starting from S1 through the mid of commercial area and passing over the bridge.
Furthermore
, right side of S1 the industrial market
is situated
.
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IELTS academic Just let us sey bt kro ajeeb sary the people that the usage and I

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