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the bar graph shows the percentage change in the products from 2015 to 2016

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The bar graph illustrates the export of a country’s products during 2015 and 2016, whereas the table signifies the percentage change in their exports. The export of all the products has increased except Gems and Jewellery because it was exported for approximately $57 billion in 2015 but the export declined by 5. 18% in the subsequent year. On the other hand, the maximal export was done by petroleum products in 2015 and there is a proportional increase of 3% when compared to the previous year. In addition, the maximum percentage variation is depicted by textiles for 15. 24% since it changes from approximately $25 billion to $32 billion in the year 2016. Though there is not enough change in the exportation of agricultural products the exports have also elevated when compared with the past year. Besides this, the engineered goods were among the top exporters in 2016, since, there is a percentile change of 8. 5% when compared to the previous year. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that even though the increment in export is not in a definite proportion in every product but when an overall average is calculated there is an approximate change of about $10 billion.
The bar graph illustrates the
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export
of a country’s
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products
during 2015 and 2016, whereas the table signifies the percentage
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change
in their exports.

The
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export
of all the
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products
has increased except Gems and
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Jewellery
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it
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for approximately $57
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billion
in 2015
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the
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export
declined by 5. 18% in the subsequent year.
On the other hand
, the maximal
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export
was done
by petroleum
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products
in 2015 and there is a proportional increase of 3% when compared to the previous year.

In addition
, the maximum percentage variation
is depicted
by textiles for 15. 24% since it
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changes
from approximately $25
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billion
to $32
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billion
in the year 2016. Though there is not
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enough
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change
in the exportation of agricultural
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products
the
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exports
have
also
elevated when compared with the past year.
Besides
this, the engineered
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goods
were among the top exporters in 2016, since, there is a percentile
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change
of 8. 5% when compared to the previous year.

In conclusion
, it can
be reiterated
that
even though
the increment in
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export
is not in a
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definite
proportion in every
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product
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but
when an
overall
average
is calculated
there is an approximate
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of about $10
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billion
.
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