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The graph shows the percentage of single men in America, Vietnam, China from 2000 to 2020.

The graph shows the percentage of single men in America, Vietnam, China from 2000 to 2020. nNVA7
The line graph demonstrates information relating to unmarried males in three countries between 2000 and 2020. Overall, it can be seen from the chart that there were increasing trends in the rate of single males in each country in the period shown. Additionally, Vietnam had the highest percentage in the final year comparison with others. Looking at the chart in more detail, in 2000, there was the same rate with 5% in the percentages of Vietnam and China. During the same period, a higher rate with 10% was seen in the figure for America. Until 2015, an increase to the same rate with 14% was shown in the data of both Vietnam and America, while the figure for China rose to 8%. Turning to the remaining dataset, in 2020, the figures for both China and America were about 15% and 18% respectively. In the same year, there was a considerably higher rate by 9% in the figure for Vietnam in comparison to that of China.
The line graph demonstrates information relating to unmarried males in three countries between 2000 and 2020.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
from the chart that there were increasing trends in the
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rate
of single males in each country in the period shown.
Additionally
, Vietnam had the highest percentage in the final year comparison with others.

Looking at the chart in more detail, in 2000, there was the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
with 5% in the percentages of Vietnam and China. During the same period, a higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rate
with 10% was
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seen
in the
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figure
for America. Until 2015, an increase to the same
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rate
with 14%
was shown
in the data of both Vietnam and America, while the
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figure
for China rose to 8%.

Turning to the remaining dataset, in 2020, the
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figures
for both China and America were about 15% and 18%
respectively
. In the same year, there was a
considerably
higher
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rate
by 9% in the
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figure
for Vietnam
in comparison
to that of China.
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