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How should your dream house would be?

How should your dream house would be? bDEp3
Everyone wants to own a house. I too want to own one. I wish to have a duplex house located near a beach. I want my house to be a mimic of nature. I want a little garden in front of the house with a small waterfall. So, I can do meditation there. Wherever I found places in the house I will keep plants over there to get the feel of nature. In the foyer, I want a buddha statue that gives peace and positive vibes while entering the house. On the ground floor, I would like to have three king-sized bedrooms. One is for my parents, the second is for my maternal grandmother and the third is for myself. Each bedrooms will have vibrant curtains, exquisite cupboards, cozy beds, and some tiny plants. The living hall will be spacious and have perfect loungers. On the left corner of the living room, there is a modern and open-type kitchen with a square typed dining table. So, all of our family members can have meals together in the dining area. In the living room, there is a staircase that will take us to the first floor. On the first floor, there will be a well-ventilated room for my brother. I would love to have a balcony on the first floor to adore the beach view. So, there we can spend our morning time with a cup of coffee. I keep some plants on the balcony and I want a study room there on the balcony with a swing. So, I can read books while moving on the swing slowly. There will be another room for guests with a big French window that gives a great view of the beach. Everyone in the house will enjoy the beauty of nature and get instant positive vibes from nature. I want to enjoy myself there with all of my loved ones in a serene environment.
Everyone
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to
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own
a
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house
.
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I too
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want
to
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own
one. I wish to have a duplex
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house
located near a beach.
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I
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want
my
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house
to be a mimic of
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nature
.
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I
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want
a
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little
garden in front of the
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house
with a
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small
waterfall.
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So
, I can do meditation there.
“Wherever” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Wherever
I found places in the
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house
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
plants over there to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the feel of
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nature
. In the foyer, I
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want
a
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buddha
statue that gives peace and
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positive
vibes while entering the
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house
. On the ground
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floor
, I would like to have three king-sized bedrooms. One is for my parents, the second is for my maternal grandmother and the third is for myself. Each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "bedroom"?
bedrooms
will have vibrant curtains, exquisite cupboards, cozy beds, and
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some
tiny plants. The living hall will be spacious and have perfect loungers. On the
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left
corner of the living
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room
, there is a modern and open-type kitchen with a square typed dining table.
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So
, all of our family members can have meals together in the dining area. In the living
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room
, there is a staircase that will take us to the
first
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floor
. On the
first
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floor
, there will be a well-ventilated
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room
for my brother. I would
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love
to have a balcony on the
first
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floor
to adore the beach view.
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So
, there we can spend our morning time with a cup of coffee. I
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keep
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some
plants on the balcony and I
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want
a study
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room
there on the balcony with a swing.
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So
, I can read books while moving on the swing
slowly
. There will be another
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room
for guests with a
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big
French window that gives a great view of the beach. Everyone in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
will enjoy the beauty of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nature
and
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get
instant
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positive
vibes from
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nature
. I
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want
to enjoy myself there with all of my
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loved
ones in a serene environment.
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IELTS academic How should your dream house would be?

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321 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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