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Islip town centre will be develop in the future.

Islip town centre will be develop in the future. AB2qN
The maps show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Overall, is that the centre of town will be significantly modernize in future and will be add a number of changes. The noticeable developments will be that the town centre will be bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing reconstruct instead shops. Look at the map more detail, we can see that park, school and housing will be not change their place. The other physical structers that between new buildings and shops will be add road only for pedestrians, in the middle of the centre of town. Finally, one of the main changes will be describe route for car, circum of the town centre.
The maps
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of a
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small
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Islip
as it is
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now
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comparisons where relevant.

Overall
, is that the
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centre
of
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town
will be
significantly
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modernize
in future and will be
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add
a number of
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changes
. The noticeable developments will be that the
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town
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centre
will be bus station, shopping
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centre
, car park and new housing reconstruct
instead
shops.

Look at the map more detail, we can
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that park, school and housing will be not
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change
their place. The other physical
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structers
that between new buildings and shops will be
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add
road
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only
for pedestrians, in the middle of the
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centre
of
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town
.
Finally
, one of the main
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route for car,
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.
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IELTS academic Islip town centre will be develop in the future.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
141 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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