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How much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on fuel.

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The graph indicates how much people in the US and the UK spend on fuel, with unit is measured in percent of income. Overall, the percentage of income in the UK by the poorest and the richest are greater than in the US, besides the figure for spending the fuel in the UK generally increase whereas it decrease in the US. The spending on petrol by the poorest Americans was 4 times bigger than the poorest British, at nearly 4% and about 1% respectively. As the poor Americans' level of income improves their spending on petrol rose to just over 5%, and this figure decreased steadily, in contrast to British wherein their spending grew consistently as they become richer. Despite the difference on trends, both countries spending on petrol was the same as people reached the upper border of middle-income, at almost 4%. Rich people in both countries spent around 4% on petrol, however, in the USA as they move to the richest category their spending dropped continuously to just over 2%, whereas in the UK it level off, after which it declined to just over 3%.
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in the US and the UK spend on fuel, with unit
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the fuel in the UK
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decrease
in the US.

The
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petrol
by the poorest Americans was 4 times bigger than the poorest British, at
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over 5%, and this figure decreased
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grew
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reached the upper border of middle-income, at almost 4%.

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in both countries spent around 4% on
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over 2%, whereas in the UK it
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over 3%.
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