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The pie-chart illustrate information about the use of water for separate purposes in Australia and the residential water consumed in Australia in 2004

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The pie chart illustrate information about the used of water for separate purposes in Australia and the residential water consumed in Australia in 2004 the data is calibrated in the percentage. Overall, it is clear that, the maximum water had been used for residential in Australia from 2004, and while the minimum water had been used for other in Australia. On the one word, the water had been used for industry in Austraila that was only 11 % and the percentage had been slightly decreased of the water had been used for government, that was 6% moreover the water consumed had been for residential in Austraila with that was only 13 % in addition the ratio had been in client of the business which was 10%. On the flip side, the proportion had been remained stable of the bathroom and garden, that was approximately 20% in Australia from 2004. In addition, the residential water had we use of toilet, that was nearly 10% moreover around 10% residential water had been consumed for kitchen in Australia.
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IELTS academic The pie-chart illustrate information about the use of water for separate purposes in Australia and the residential water consumed in Australia in 2004

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