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Is Studying Abroad Necessary for Students?

Is Studying Abroad Necessary for Students? 7WxN6

From my perspective, studying abroad is essential for students since it has practical benefits. First and foremost, to be a student of a foreign school, your language ability must be appropriate, which forces you to study hard and helps you improve your language skill. In addition, learning a new language not only hones your language competence but also widens your knowledge about that language-using country’s culture and history. Secondly, when you finish your study abroad program and return home with a new perspective on a great education, and a willingness to learn; needless to say, all of these are very attractive to future employers. Therefore, your career opportunities can be more potential, which means you can have a more high-salary, professional, and dignified job. Lastly, having a completely new life in a foreign land requires lots of social skills including hard and soft ones. As a result, it will help you gain more responsibility for your life such as taking care of yourself, household chores, preparing things, and so on since when we are at home, our parents mostly do it. In conclusion, studying abroad is a profitable experience that helps us explore more about ourselves and our world.

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