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International University Graduates

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In this graph we will see how the percentage of international students change graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. . In the graph we can see the university that has the most international graduates is New Brunswick with 7% in 2001 and 12% in 2006 which can show us that the amount of students that graduate keeps rising through the years. After New Brunswick we can see that British Columbia is in second place with 11% graduates in 2006. The universities that have the least international graduates are Ontario with the 3% in 2001 and the 6% in 2002, and both Newfoundland and Manitoba had 3. 5% in 2001 and 7% in 2006. The only university that had a withdrawal in the amount of graduated is Alberta Collge that had a reduction of the 1. 5%.

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