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The bar chart show the percentage of elderly people In three nations in 1980, 2000 and 2030

The bar chart show the percentage of elderly people In three nations in 1980, 2000 and 2030 oxnO3

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of 65 and over population in three nations in 1980, 2000 and projection for 2030. Overall, it is noticed that the percentage of Germany elderly citizen was the maximum in a given time. Also, it is predicted that there will be an upward trend in 65+ population in all three nations by 2030. At the first looking, in 1980, the least population of 65 and over was in Canada, which was exactly 10%. The population of Germany was 5% more than the Canada in the same year and there had a negligible difference in the proportion of Germany and UK in 1980, which was around 1%. In addition, in 2000, the percentage of old people in Canada and UK was the remained same 15%, while Germany 65+ proportion went up by 5%. It is predicted that in 2030 the population of Germany will be reached a top, but the percentage of Canadian and British old people will be increased slightly to about 21% and 19% respectively.

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given
 bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of 65 and over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 in three nations in 1980, 2000 and projection for 2030.

Overall
, it is noticed
 that the percentage of Germany elderly citizen was the maximum in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time. Also
, it is predicted
 that there will be an upward trend in 65+ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 in all three nations by 2030.

At the first
 looking, in 1980, the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of 65 and over was in Canada, which was exactly 10%. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of Germany was 5% more than the Canada in the same year and there had a negligible difference in the proportion of Germany and UK in 1980, which was around 1%.

In addition
, in 2000, the percentage of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in Canada and UK was the remained same 15%, while Germany 65+ proportion went up by 5%. It is predicted
 that in 2030 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of Germany will be reached
 a top, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the percentage of Canadian and British This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will be increased
slightly
 to about 21% and 19% respectively
. 