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The bar graph demonstrates the changes in four different places( Home, Work, College and Library ) where folks used the Internet in four years( 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004). The data has been measured in percentage. After an Overall analysis of the given chart it is clear that, the usage of internet fluctuated over the given period, work showed the decreasing trend. To begin with, in 1998, the ratio of people used the internet at home was approximately 55%, then there was a slight drop from 55% to 48% in 2000, despite a drop, the figure raised up to nearly 54% until 2004. Meanwhile, the internet usage at work was recorded below 30% which was identical in 2000 that is 28% respectively. However, it dropped to 18% till 2004. Furthermore, in 1998, there was a fluctuating of the internet in both college and library until 2004. In 1998, people used internet at college only 20% while at library was 12 percent. Although it mushroomed up to 25 percent unless 2002, it went down below 20% in 2004. Whereas, despite fluctuations, usage raised to 27 percent in 2004 for library.

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