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Increase in rubbish production in recent years and suggestions to government how to solve itt

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As population of the world is increasing, more and more waste generation is also taking place. In today's times, it has been observed that there is an alarming increasing in graph of rubbish that is being produced. Whether it is household or factories or any small business, the same trend has been recorded from everywhere. There may be few possible reasons as to why this issue is becoming more prevelant in recent times. Primarily, one major reason is improper waste management systems which may be due to unawareness of people about recycling and reuse. Another reason being the massive increase in use of plastic in packaged foods as now the consumption of these ready made foods are in high demand. Also, since there is rubbish being generated in a large amount, the methods that were previously used for its management are no longer effective. This is a problem, for which people and government needs to come together and work towards proper waste management strategies. Government needs to come up with some effective mehods such as how to recycle products in an effective way. They can also guide people about how to separate different kind of rubbish that is biodegradable and non-biodegradable and dispose it correctly. Population growth and technology advancement has contributed majorly in disturbing the balance of waste being produced, and its proper disposal and management. Strict actions needs to be taken in order to make sure that it does not disturb the environmental balance.
As population of the world is increasing, more and more
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waste
generation is
also
taking place. In
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today
's times, it has
been observed
that there is an alarming increasing in graph of rubbish
that is
being produced
. Whether it is household or factories or any
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small
business, the same trend has
been recorded
from everywhere.

There may be few possible reasons as to why this issue is becoming more
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prevelant
in recent times.
Primarily
, one major reason is improper
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waste
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management
systems which may be due to unawareness of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
about recycling and reuse. Another reason being the massive increase in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of plastic in packaged foods as
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now
the consumption of these
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ready made
foods are in high demand.
Also
, since there is rubbish
being generated
in a large amount, the methods that were previously
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used
for its
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management
are no longer effective.

This is a problem, for which
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people
and
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government
needs to
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come
together and work towards proper
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waste
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management
strategies.
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Government
needs to
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come
up with
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some
effective
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mehods
such as how to recycle products
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in an effective way
. They can
also
guide
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people
about how to separate
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different
kind of rubbish
that is
biodegradable and non-biodegradable and dispose it
correctly
.

Population growth and technology advancement has contributed
majorly
in disturbing the balance of
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waste
being produced
, and its proper disposal and
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management
. Strict actions needs to
be taken
in order to
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make
sure that it does not disturb the environmental balance.
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IELTS academic Increase in rubbish production in recent years and suggestions to government how to solve itt

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