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Pros and cons using public transports

Pros and cons using public transports 2KgEM
Recently, people prefer using public transportation than their own vehicles. One major benefit of using public transport is reduces traffic jams and thus slows down global warming. However Every coins has two side and that is true for the usage of public transport as well, there are also negative aspects associated with it. One of the biggest benefits of using public transport is that it can reduces air pollution. The more people choose public transport, the less motor bike and on the road which is a equal symbols to help our planet reduce the air pollution, improve the environment quality. In addition, using public transports instead of private car is a great alternative if you can’t drive or just want to save you money cause bus, railway, … always cost less than other vehicles. On the other hand, buses and metros they all have the time table that you need to be in time if only you want to be late. Taking public transports in rush hour is quite uncomfortable, sometimes there is not enough space for passenger to take a seat. Many of people use public transportation everyday therefore it can be dirty. A large number of people taking public transport daily that due to high chances for infection disease such as Covid-19. To sum up, people have many different opinion about using public transport but I do believe that the benefits outweighed the drawbacks. I also propose that our major kinds of transit should be buses or trains. Only private automobiles for urgently needed purposes should be utilized. Public transit should otherwise be utilized. It saves our surroundings.
Recently,
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prefer using
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transportation than their
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vehicles. One major benefit of using
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public
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transport
is
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reduces
traffic jams and
thus
slows down global warming.
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However
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public
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transport
as well
, there are
also
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negative
aspects associated with it.

One of the biggest benefits of using
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public
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is that it can
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reduces
air pollution. The more
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people
choose
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public
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transport
, the less motor bike and on the road which is
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equal
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to
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help
our planet
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reduce
the air pollution,
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improve
the environment quality.
In addition
, using
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public
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transports
instead
of private car is a great alternative if you can’t drive or
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want to save you money cause bus, railway, … always cost less than other vehicles.

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, buses and metros they all have the time table that you need to be in time if
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only
you want to be late. Taking
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public
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transports
in rush hour is quite uncomfortable,
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sometimes
there is not
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enough
space for passenger to take a seat.
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of
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use
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transportation
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it can be dirty.
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taking
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public
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transport
daily that due to high chances for infection disease such as Covid-19.

To sum up,
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people
have
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many
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different
opinion about using
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public
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transport
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I do believe that the benefits outweighed the drawbacks. I
also
propose that our major kinds of transit should be buses or trains.
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Only
private automobiles for
urgently
needed purposes should
be utilized
.
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Public
transit should
otherwise
be utilized
. It saves our surroundings.
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IELTS academic Pros and cons using public transports

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