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report the main features and make comparisons two maps of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015

report the main features and make comparisons two maps of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015 paDA3
The picture on the top shows the outskirt of Fosbury in 1980 and another picture shows it in 2015. As illustrated, several major changes occur across this period of time. I will explain these differences and compare the two outskirts. In 1980, a large area at the southeast of the town was fields and two tennis courts existed in the opposite of fields. While another image shows the fields were demolished in 2015 and warehouses were built and tennis courts were replaced with a modern sports center. By comparison of two maps distinguished that an empty area in the center of the city was used for a green area in 2015 and a large roundabout was built nearby it. Houses located northwest of the Fosbury and the hotel are the only untouched places in this city. In 2015, the grocer’s shop was destroyed and a big supermarket opened instead of it. Terrace houses situated near the park in 2015 used to as park in 1980. Overall, the city in 2015 was most modern than in 1980, and shops and sports center rebuilt according to new architectural aspects.
The picture on the top
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shows
the outskirt of
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Fosbury
in 1980 and another picture
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shows
it in 2015. As illustrated, several major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
occur across this period of time. I will
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explain
these differences and compare the two outskirts.

In 1980, a large area at the southeast of the town was fields and two tennis courts existed in the opposite of fields. While another image
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shows
the fields
were demolished
in 2015 and warehouses
were built
and tennis courts
were replaced
with a modern sports center. By comparison of two maps distinguished that an empty area in the center of the city was
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used
for a green area in 2015 and a large roundabout
was built
nearby it.
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Houses
located northwest of the
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Fosbury
and the hotel are the
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only
untouched places in this city. In 2015, the grocer’s shop was
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destroyed
and a
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big
supermarket opened
instead
of it. Terrace
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houses
situated near the park in 2015
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used
to as park in 1980.

Overall
, the city in 2015 was most
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modern
than in 1980, and shops and sports center rebuilt according to new architectural aspects.
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IELTS academic report the main features and make comparisons two maps of the town of Fosbury in 1980 and 2015

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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