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Income student in Britain

Income student in Britain 5LxoA

The table reveals information regarding they changes Which took place in sources of a student income in the United Kingdom over the nine year Period Between 1989 and 1998 As it can be seen students income was not represented in 1989 but this group to 24% In 1998 And it was the greatest percentage increase during nine year period. The same upward trend can be Also be observed for income on earnings it was a peaked At 1919 to 14% And then followed by a slide declined to 12% at 1998 Except for 3% decline in other sources reached to 34% in 1998 However parental contribution make up less significant amount reduced by half from 32% to 16% In 1998 The largest percentage decrease in grades where there was remind stable till 1992 and after that went down by 24% from 38% to 14% Overall expect for 1989 the most significant general change was a shift by 1. 66% from 4. 04 to 5. 7

The table reveals information regarding they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes


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Which
 took place in sources of a student income in the United Kingdom over the nine year

Period Between 1989 and 1998

As it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 students income was not represented in 1989 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this group to 24% In 1998 And it was the greatest percentage increase during It seems that a hyphen is missing.nine-year
nine year
 period. The same upward trend can be Also
be observed
 for income on earnings it was a peaked At 1919 to 14% And then followed by a slide declined to 12% at 1998 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
Except for
 3% decline in other sources reached to 34% in 1998

However
 parental contribution This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up less significant amount This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by half from 32% to 16%

In 1998 The largest percentage decrease in grades where there was Consider using a past participle here: "reminded".reminded
remind
 stable till 1992 and after that went down by 24% from 38% to 14%

Overall
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 for 1989 the most significant general This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 was a shift by 1. 66% from 4. 04 to 5. 7