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Physical activity involved by female and male

Physical activity involved by female and male PJ9p

The table illustrates the involvement of men and women in different physical activities during one year in Australia. Overall, as it is shown the majority of people prefer to go for walking. However, for males the lowest percentage was in yoga and netball, bad for women football and basketball. The physical activity that both genders involved in the most was walking for exercise. For some exercise such as cycling and BMXing the percentage of females who were involved was half the males percentage. Moreover, there were some sports that male did not have a place in, like netball and yoga. In addition to that it was surprising that the percentage of females in both football and basketball was zero. Meanwhile, both genders were attracted to fitness. Furthermore, the least activity that has both genders involved in was basketball. From the data, it is clear that the figure of females have higher percentage than males.

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