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the British people that gave money to the charity between 1990 to 2010 by contrasting the ages average where the money was given.

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Here you will find an analysis of the British people that gave money to the charity between 1990 to 2010 by contrasting the ages average where the money was given. The lowest point in the chart takes place for the people between 18-25 years old in which both generations (1990 and 2010) people did not contribute with the charity as much as the other ages. As the chart presents the highest point do not share the same ages, people from 36-50 in 1990 obtained the peak of the giving money to charity unlike the people from 2010 at the age 51-65 they contributed most with money obtaining the highest point in chart. From both generations after they get their highest point they fall sharply in the continued ages. This analysis shows us how the early ages do not contribute with the amount of money as the others ages do, also it shows us that the same ages but in different times they may contribute differently to charity, and as we saw the people contributed less in their increasing age after the peak point.
Here you will find an analysis of the British
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people
that gave
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money
to the
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charity
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1990 and 2010".
between 1990 to 2010
by contrasting the
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ages
average where the
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money
was
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given
.

The lowest
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point
in the chart takes place for the
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people
between 18-25 years
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old
in which both generations (1990 and 2010)
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people
did not contribute with the
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charity
as much as the other
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ages
. As the chart presents the highest
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point
do not share the same
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ages
,
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people
from 36-50 in 1990 obtained the peak of the giving
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money
to
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charity
unlike the
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people
from 2010 at the
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age
51-65 they contributed most with
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money
obtaining the highest
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point
in chart. From both generations after they
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get
their highest
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point
they fall
sharply
in the continued ages.

This analysis
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shows
us how the early
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ages
do not contribute with the amount of
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money
as the others
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ages
do,
also
it
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shows
us that the same
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ages
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but
in
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different
times they may contribute
differently
to
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charity
, and as we
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saw
the
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people
contributed less in their increasing
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age
after the peak
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point
.
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IELTS academic the British people that gave money to the charity between 1990 to 2010 by contrasting the ages average where the money was given.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
183 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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