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pie chart for sales in canada in 2005 to 2010

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The two pie charts depicts the digital shopping sales for the retail segment in Canada in 2005 and 2010. The three products are electronic and appliances, food and beverage and home furnishing item. Overall, the most retail sector is electronic and appliances in certain year and around less than half in the another year. Electronic and appliances contributed 50% which was the highest online sales in the given period. After than 36% of food and beverages were accounted for the retail shopping and the home furnishing held only 14% which was the most less sale for the year of 2005. In 2010, the major online sales accounted for the food and beverages. Followed by 39% of the electronic and appliances contributed in the given period of time. The home furnishing sales was only 19%. In 2005, majority of sales were accounted for the electronics and appliances with 50%. However, these percentage drooped by 39% in next five years.

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, food and beverage and home furnishing item.

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 for the year of 2005.

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 five years. 