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In 2011, total inquiries in three ways received the Tourist Information Office in an urban area from January to June period has been illustrated in the line graph.

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In 2011, total inquiries in three ways received the Tourist Information Office in an urban area from January to June period has been illustrated in the line graph. At first glance, the number of inquiries increased via in person and telephone the end of the period while, number of letter or email decreased considerably. In January, count of inquiries in person was least amount at just over 400 which increased sharply over talking inquiries by letter or email in the month of march and afterward number of inquiries rocketed to about 1900 in the June by over talking inquiries by telephone during April. For telephone inquiries, is has some fluctuation in January to march which was stable during April at about 1000, later on which boom to 1600 in the end of inquiries period. Inquiries by email or letter was second most common method in the January, it decreased slightly from January to march after that it decreased sharply till may at less than 400 which remained stable in the may to June.

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