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In 2007, there were six bus stops found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010. Next, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital road. Besides, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010.

In 2007, there were six bus stops found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010. Next, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital road. Besides, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010. g5qJa
The double maps illustrate the road structure of the city hospital from 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the roads were retained same as before. Converseley, the bus stops and car parking were refurbish, and two roundabouts reconstructed newly. In 2007, there were six bus stops found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010. Next, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital road. Besides, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010. Similarly, there was a car parking for both staff and public located at the east side of the hospital route in 2007. Interestingly, that parking divided into two sections. The staff car park stood at the same position, however, the public car park rebuilt beside the ring road. Finally, two rounabouts created in the year of 2010, which attached with the bus station according to the second map.
The double maps illustrate the
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structure of the city hospital from 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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roads
were retained
same as
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before
.
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Converseley
, the bus
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stops
and
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car
parking
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were
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refurbish
, and two roundabouts reconstructed
newly
.

In 2007, there were six bus
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stops
found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010.
Next
, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital
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road
.
Besides
, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010.

Similarly
, there was a
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car
parking for both staff and public located at the east side of the hospital route in 2007.
Interestingly
, that parking divided into two sections. The staff
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car
park stood at the same position,
however
, the public
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car
park rebuilt beside the ring
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road
.
Finally
, two
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rounabouts
created in the year of 2010, which attached with the bus station according to the second map.
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IELTS academic In 2007, there were six bus stops found both side of the clinic route, which vanished in 2010. Next, one bus station built in 2010, at the west side of the hospital road. Besides, the bus station attached with two roundabouts in 2010.

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