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Comparison on the route now and later after the development of city centre hospital

Comparison on the route now and later after the development of city centre hospital BJLAa
The two maps give comparison between the changes taken place to get an access to the city hospital in the year 2007 and 2010. There are lot of developments that took place in the year 2010 In the year 2007 the city road connecting to reach the hospital was narrow. The car park and the bus stop does not seem to be properly organised as bus stop was next to Car park. It can be observed from the map that in the year 2010 the road access to city hospital was more broaden that it was previously. There was a separate section allotted for public car park and for staff car park for city hospital staff. There was a separate bus station built which was more organised as compared to 2007. Unlike the narrow road in the year 2007 there were roundabouts built connecting the city road and hospital road in the year 2010. This will help curtail the traffic congestion leading to easy road access to city hospital. To summarise, the road access to city hospital in the year 2010 was more organised and convenient than it was in the year 2007
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access
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hospital
in the
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year
2007 and 2010. There are
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lot of
developments that took place in the
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2010

In the
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2007 the city
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road
connecting to reach the
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hospital
was narrow. The
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car
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park
and the bus
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stop
does not seem to be
properly
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organised
as bus
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stop
was
next
to
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Car
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park
. It can
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from the map that in the
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year
2010 the
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road
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access
to city
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hospital
was more broaden that it was previously. There was a separate section allotted for public
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car
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park
and for staff
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car
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park
for city
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hospital
staff. There was a separate bus station built which was more
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organised
as compared to 2007.

Unlike the narrow
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road
in the
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year
2007 there were roundabouts built connecting the city
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road
and
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hospital
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road
in the
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year
2010. This will
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help
curtail the traffic congestion leading to easy
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road
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access
to city
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hospital
. To
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, the
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road
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to city
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hospital
in the
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2010 was more
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organised
and convenient than it was in the
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2007

IELTS academic Comparison on the route now and later after the development of city centre hospital

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