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Australian men and women who are doing physical exercise, analyze charts

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Analyzing the chart that we can observ below, we can see percentages about the quantity of Australian men and women realizing exercises and physical activity periodicaly. Talent a fast look at the chart, we can note that women are mayority in physical activity than men, specially between 28 and 64 years old, and since 34 and 64 years old, the percentage is up to 50% of females. But men are more active than the women group from 15 to 24 years old, by 5% more than same age women. We can observ that this percentage is getting equalize after 64 years old, when men and women, both are doing exercises between 46, 7% and 47, 1%, being females just less than one point upper than male group. The biggest difference that we can see is between women and men segment between 35 and 44 years old, when women are active 13% more than men group. In general, the razonable conclution Is that women are more phisically able and have a better disposition to improve their health. Perhaps the cultural conditions, are influencing the way to see the body and the differents expectatives in different gender groups, is one of the reasons. However, to start to promote better health and lifestyle between being humans and decrease the difference between gender groups is something that should be analized by sociology.

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