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What funny event or accident happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Who was there? How did people react?

What funny event or accident happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Who was there? How did people react? G3DkQ
Since I was young, my grandpa taught me to ride a bicycle. So I can ride the bicycle when I was about seven years old. One day, I rode the bicycle on the street with my friends. I jeered my friends while biking. At this time, I stepped on a stone and fell on the ground. My elbow hurt and bled from it. I cried aloud when I saw blood. My friends laughed heartily looking at me. My face was so funny due to it was full of tears and rhinitis. My mom run to me and said " Nothing happen. Don't cry. It's okay, baby. " At this time, I knew I was in pain. But now when I think about it, it is so funny.
Since I was young, my grandpa taught me to ride a bicycle.
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I can ride the bicycle when I was about seven years
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. One day, I rode the bicycle on the street with my friends. I jeered my friends while biking. At this time, I stepped on a stone and fell on the ground. My elbow hurt and bled from it. I cried aloud when I
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blood. My friends laughed
heartily
looking at me. My face was
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funny
due to it was full of tears and rhinitis.
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mom run to me and said
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Nothing happen. Don't cry. It's okay, baby.
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At this time, I knew I was in pain.
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about it, it is
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IELTS academic What funny event or accident happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Who was there? How did people react?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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