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What funny event or accident happened? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Who was there? How did people react?

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Since I was young, my grandpa taught me to ride a bicycle. So I can ride the bicycle when I was about seven years old. One day, I rode the bicycle on the street with my friends. I jeered my friends while biking. At this time, I stepped on a stone and fell on the ground. My elbow hurt and bled from it. I cried aloud when I saw blood. My friends laughed heartily looking at me. My face was so funny due to it was full of tears and rhinitis. My mom run to me and said " Nothing happen. Don't cry. It's okay, baby. " At this time, I knew I was in pain. But now when I think about it, it is so funny.

Since I was young, my grandpa taught me to ride a bicycle. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 I can ride the bicycle when I was about seven years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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. One day, I rode the bicycle on the street with my friends. I jeered my friends while biking. At this time, I stepped on a stone and fell on the ground. My elbow hurt and bled from it. I cried aloud when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 blood. My friends laughed heartily
 looking at me. My face was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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funny
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Nothing happen. Don't cry. It's okay, baby. Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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 At this time, I knew I was in pain. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 about it, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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