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IELTS Academic writing task 1 map

IELTS Academic writing task 1 map 55M3e
The map below compares how town named as Sergeli has changed up to now from 1995. Overall, it is clear that small town was originally undeveloped entirely first. After, there had been completed establishing the fishing port, golf zone for entertainment next to tennis club. B1 At the first glance, in the north east side of the town farmland as well as forest park were cut down and there had been built up golf with the tennis club instead. The main change for the residential area is to add additional road leading to the west of the town exactly, and establishing residency. B2 As the map illustrates in the past there was only fishing port beside the fish market and now it doesn't exist as so sea was emptied. Apartments were reformed to fish markets, and shops to restaurant too. The last change seems in the hotel by constructing parking lot
The map below compares how
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town
named as
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Sergeli
has
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changed
up to
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now
from 1995.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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small
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town
was
originally
undeveloped
entirely
first
. After, there had
been completed
establishing the fishing port, golf zone for entertainment
next
to tennis club.

B1

At the
first
glance, in the
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north east
side of the
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town
farmland
as well
as forest park were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down and there had
been built
up golf with the tennis club
instead
. The main
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
for the residential area is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
additional road leading to the west of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
exactly, and establishing residency.

B2

As the map illustrates in the past there was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
fishing port beside the fish market and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
it doesn't exist as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sea
was emptied
. Apartments
were reformed
to fish markets, and shops to restaurant too. The last
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
seems in the hotel by constructing parking
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lot

IELTS academic IELTS Academic writing task 1 map

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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