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The illustrated map shows the plans of a public park from when it was inaugurated in 1920 and today. The park has seen a lot of change throughout the time with the removal and addition of new places and centers of attraction. The park originally has two point of entrance, one from the Arnold Avenue and other from the Eldon Street, in addition to those, a third entrance from the underground parking is added. A central seating space is created rather than distributing the seats at the park boundaries. The park has definitely seen a lot of renovation since 1920. The stage for musicians have been converted into a full fledged amphitheater. The fountain in the center is replaced by a large rose garden with seating space around it. the pond has been converted to a play area for children. The rose garden beside the pond has been replaced by a café. The garden at the south of the stage as been removed. Lastly, the glasshouse has been redesigned into a beautiful water feature.

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shows
 the plans of a public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from when it was inaugurated
 in 1920 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 throughout the time with the removal and addition of new places and centers of attraction.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
originally
 has two point of entrance, one from the Arnold Avenue and other from the Eldon Street, in addition
 to those, a third entrance from the underground parking is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. A central seating space is created
rather
 than distributing the seats at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 boundaries.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 has definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 renovation since 1920. The stage for musicians have been converted
 into a full fledged amphitheater. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 fountain in the center is replaced
 by a large rose garden with seating space around it. the pond has been converted
 to a play area for children. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 rose garden beside the pond has been replaced
 by a café. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 garden at the south of the stage as been removed
. Lastly
, the glasshouse has been redesigned
 into a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 water feature. 