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The below graph show the demand from electricity in england in a typically days summer and winter and pie chart show the how electricity was used

The below graph show the demand from electricity in england in a typically days summer and winter and pie chart show the how electricity was used gAV63
The given graphs show the electricity demand in England in a typical day of winter and summer and also show how people used this electricity. According to the first line graph, we can see that the electricity demand in winter is much higher than the demand in summer in England. In a typical day, the electricity demand in winter season is around 35000 units and it is around 18000 units in the summer season. Again the demand for the electricity varies on several hours of the day and the demand from 6: 00 to 9: 00 am is lesser than the demand in other hours of the day. During the winter the demand is highest from 21: 00 to 23: 00 and during summer the demand is highest from 13: 00 to 14: 00 hours. Based on the pie chart we can infer that the room heating and water heating is the main purpose people consume the electricity in England. The demand for washing machine, kettle and ovens consume around 18% of total electricity consumed and two other categories consume 15% electricity each. These two other categories which consume 30% of total electricity include light, TV, Radio, vacuum cleaner, food mixer and other electric told and devices.
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in England.

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from 6: 00 to 9: 00 am is lesser than the
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hours of the day. During the
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around 18% of total
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15%
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30% of total
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IELTS academic The below graph show the demand from electricity in england in a typically days summer and winter and pie chart show the how electricity was used

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