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The chart below show the amount and type of sugary foods consumed by men and women and four different countries.

The chart below show the amount and type of sugary foods consumed by men and women and four different countries. 86P3B
The chart illustrates the type of sugary foods (chocolate, flavoured yoghurt, protein bars, biscuits) eaten by men and women in USA, UK, France and Canada along with the ratio of consumption. The data are measured in percentage. Overall, it is clear that women consumed most foods which contains sugar compare to men. On the whole, the four countries had the same overall percentage while, in France, people ate more chocolates, however, the other countries had similar rate. First of all, the intake of sugary foods by women is relatively higher than the men who consumed those foods which is 64% of women tend to eat more unhealthy foods whereas 34% of men appeared to be more healthier in all four countries. In addition, the consumption of chocolate is notable in France because nearly half the population (42%) tend to eat chocolates more often, nevertheless, the USA, Canada and UK had 21%, 21% and 23% respectivelty. Protein bars in Canada had the most with 53% while UK had the least with 12%, meanwhile, the intake of supplements flavoured yoghurt and biscuits appears to be with similar percentage in all four countries.
The chart illustrates the type of sugary
foods
(chocolate,
flavoured
yoghurt
, protein bars, biscuits) eaten by
men
and
women
in USA
, UK, France and Canada along with the ratio of consumption. The data
are measured
in percentage.

Overall
, it is
clear
that
women
consumed most
foods
which contains sugar compare to
men
.
On the whole
, the four countries had the same
overall
percentage while, in France,
people
ate more
chocolates
,
however
, the other countries had similar rate.

First of all
, the intake of sugary
foods
by
women
is
relatively
higher than the
men
who consumed those
foods
which is 64% of
women
tend to eat more unhealthy
foods
whereas 34% of
men
appeared to be
more healthier
in all four countries.

In addition
, the consumption of chocolate is notable in France
because
nearly
half the population (42%) tend to eat
chocolates
more
often
,
nevertheless
, the USA, Canada and UK had 21%, 21% and 23%
respectivelty
. Protein bars in Canada had the most with 53% while UK had the least with 12%, meanwhile, the intake of supplements
flavoured
yoghurt
and biscuits appears to be with similar percentage in all four countries.
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IELTS academic The chart below show the amount and type of sugary foods consumed by men and women and four different countries.

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