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The diagrams show how the greenhouse effect and radiation from the sun reaches the Earth.

The diagrams show how the greenhouse effect and radiation from the sun reaches the Earth. VyGG3
The diagrams show how the greenhouse effect and radiation from the sun reaches the Earth. In general terms, the greenhouse effect happens when heat radiation from the sun is trapped the Earth's atmosphere. First of all, heat radiation is produced by the sun. This radiation travels towards the Earth's atmosphere. About 20% of the sun's radiation is scattered and reflected by clouds. 6% of the radiation is scattered by the Earth's atmosphere and 19% of the radiation is absorbed by the Earth. So, the Earth is warmed by the sun's radiation. Secondly, at niight some place of the Earth's heat is lost. After, the greenhouse gases in the atmosphere trap and reflect the heat back to the Earth. This heat makes our planet suitablee for life. However, the population may increa the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. More greenhouse trap and reflect more heat. This mean the Earth becomes warmer.
The diagrams
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show
how the
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greenhouse
effect and
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radiation
from the sun reaches the Earth.

In general
terms, the
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greenhouse
effect happens when
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heat
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radiation
from the sun
is trapped
the
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Earth's
atmosphere.

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First of all
,
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heat
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radiation
is produced
by the sun. This
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radiation
travels towards the
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Earth's
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atmosphere
. About 20% of the sun's
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radiation
is scattered
and reflected by clouds. 6% of the
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radiation
is scattered
by the
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Earth's
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atmosphere
and 19% of the
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radiation
is absorbed
by the
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Earth
.
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So
, the
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Earth
is warmed
by the sun's radiation.

Secondly
, at
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niight
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some
place of the
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Earth's
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heat
is lost
. After, the
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greenhouse
gases in the
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atmosphere
trap and reflect the
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heat
back to the
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Earth
. This
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heat
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makes
our planet
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suitablee
for life.
However
, the population may
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increa
the amount of
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greenhouse
gases in the
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atmosphere
. More
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greenhouse
trap and reflect more
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heat
. This mean the
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Earth
becomes warmer.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show how the greenhouse effect and radiation from the sun reaches the Earth.

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