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Hours of sunshine in some countries

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It can be seen that in the three first months (January, February, and March) the city of Sydney begins with 25 hours of sunlight. Then, it has a gradual decline to 10 hours of sunlight less in July. After that, it has a brief rise in the next months. Getting at the same amount of hours of sunlight at the end as it started. In sharp contrast to this, London starts with 10 hours of sunshine. It continues going up overtaking Sydney in May. Getting at a maximum of almost 25 hours of sunlight. Then it has a declined in the last months. Moreover, New York begins with the least amount of warm hours (5). Nevertheless, in the month of July it takes the higher amount of hours of sunshine (30 hours). then, it has a plummet to finish to 5 arm hours. Regarding the table, it can be concluded that over a period of a year London got the lowest amount of warm hours (1, 180) and New York got the highest amount of sunlight hours (2, 535)
It can be
seen
that in the three
first
months
(January, February, and March) the city of Sydney
begins
with 25
hours
of
sunlight
. Then, it has a gradual decline to 10
hours
of
sunlight
less in July. After that, it has a brief rise in the
next
months
. Getting at the same
amount
of
hours
of
sunlight
at the
end
as it
started
.

In sharp contrast to this, London
starts
with 10
hours
of sunshine. It continues going up overtaking Sydney in May. Getting at a maximum of almost 25
hours
of
sunlight
. Then it has a declined in the last
months
.
Moreover
, New York
begins
with the least
amount
of warm
hours
(5).
Nevertheless
, in the
month
of July it takes the higher
amount
of
hours
of sunshine (30
hours)
.
then
, it has a plummet to finish to 5 arm hours.

Regarding the table, it can
be concluded
that over a period of a year London
got
the lowest
amount
of warm
hours
(1, 180) and New York
got
the highest
amount
of
sunlight
hours
(2, 535)
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IELTS academic Hours of sunshine in some countries

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