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HOW WOOD PELLETS ARE MADE

HOW WOOD PELLETS ARE MADE ENx6Q
The above diagram explains the process of making wood pellets. Wood pellets are a form of fuel used to heat up buildings and can be used in pellet stoves and furnaces. Wood pellets are made from sawdust. To make wood pellets, you have to first, gather sawdust from a sawmill. This sawdust is then hammered into fibers of uniform lengths in a hammer mill. After hammering, the fibers are dampened using steam and forced through holes in a pellet machine thereby, forming hot pellets which is then allowed to cool off. When this stage is done, the loose dusts found on the pellets are vacuumed off and then packaged in 18 kilo bags for sale. In summary, wood pellet making involves the following stages; 1. Gathering raw materials (sawdust) 2. Hammering using hammering mill 3. Steaming 4. Shaping using pellet machine 5. Cooling 6. Cleaning 7. Packaging
The above diagram
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the process of making
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wood
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.
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Wood
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pellets
are a form of fuel
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used
to heat up buildings and can be
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used
in
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pellet
stoves and furnaces.
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Wood
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pellets
are made
from sawdust.

To
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make
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wood
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, you
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have to
first
, gather sawdust from a sawmill. This sawdust is then hammered into fibers of uniform lengths in a hammer mill. After hammering, the fibers
are dampened
using steam and forced through holes in a
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pellet
machine thereby, forming hot
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pellets
which is then
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allowed
to cool off. When this stage
is done
, the loose dusts found on the
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pellets
are vacuumed
off and then packaged in 18 kilo bags for sale.

In summary,
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wood
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pellet
making involves the following stages;

1. Gathering raw materials (sawdust)

2. Hammering using hammering mill

3. Steaming

4. Shaping using
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machine

5. Cooling

6. Cleaning

7. Packaging

IELTS academic HOW WOOD PELLETS ARE MADE

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