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make a short disscussion about the good thing about your school

make a short disscussion about the good thing about your school K35V0
Firstly, my school is famous as one of the best information technology training schools in the country. The school has a fairly large campus, with rows of trees and a wonderful library. The school is in a peaceful place so you are quite comfortable to live as well as study. The school has many quality teachers as well as very good training quality. Some interesting facts are that the UIT has a lot of toilets and the internet speed is very fast.
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IELTS academic make a short disscussion about the good thing about your school

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  American English
2 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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