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how people in Melborne eat different types of fast food

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The table gives information about how people in Melborne eat different types of fast food including a hamburger, a fried chicken, a salad, a fried rice and a noodles from 2005 to 2025. It can be clearly seen from the table that all types of fast food experience an upward trend except a hamburger. In 2005, people in Melbourn consumed a fried chicken with 35 units. The amount of consumption slightly increases to 37 units and it will be reach 45 units in 2025. Similarly, the consumption of a fried rice and a noodles also shows a little change throughout the period. In terms of the amount of salad consumption, it was only 5 units in 2005 but it rises to 15 units in this year. It will expected to be 41 units in the end of the period. On the other hand, the consumption of hamburger in Melbourn shows a fluctuation. It was the most popular fast food in 2005, accounted for 40 units. Although it drops to 38 units in this year, it will be 51 units in 2025.
The table gives information about how
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eat
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different
types of
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fast
food including a hamburger, a
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fried
chicken, a salad, a
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fried
rice and
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a noodles
from 2005 to 2025.

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clearly
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seen
from the table that all types of
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fast
food experience an upward trend except a hamburger. In 2005,
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people
in
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Melbourn
consumed a
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fried
chicken with 35
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units
. The amount of
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consumption
slightly
increases to 37
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units
and it will be reach 45
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units
in 2025.
Similarly
, the
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consumption
of a
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fried
rice and
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a noodles
also
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shows
a
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little
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change
throughout the period. In terms of the amount of salad
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consumption
, it was
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5
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units
in 2005
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but
it rises to 15
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units
in this year. It will
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expected
to be 41
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in the
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end
of the period.

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, the
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consumption
of hamburger in
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Melbourn
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a fluctuation. It was the most popular
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fast
food in 2005, accounted for 40
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. Although it drops to 38
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in this year, it will be 51
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in 2025.
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IELTS academic how people in Melborne eat different types of fast food

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3 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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