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How Olive Oil is manufactured

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The diagram illustrates the step-by-step process showing how Olive oil is manufactured. In the first stage, the Olive fruits have to be picked up from the Olive trees into a basket. Next, after picking up the fruits they will be raised in cold water and belted there. Then they will be smashed in a container and then it is going to be turned into two types one is Olive paste and the other is Olive stones. Then after that, the Olive stones will be left alone and only Olive paste will be taken and they are going to be stored in bags with holes. Later the Olive bags will be taken to be pressed for separation. After the pressing is done it is going to be separated into two types- Oil and water. In the final stage, the Oil and water which got separated from the processing will be taken into Storage buildings for Sale. Overall, the process requires 10 consecutive steps for the manufacturing of Olive oil and it requires cold water, container, bags, huge pressing machines to process and get ready for storage and sale.

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oil
is manufactured
.

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have to
be picked
 up from the Olive trees into a basket. Next
, after picking up the fruits they will be raised
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cold
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water
 and belted there. Then they will be smashed
 in a container and then it is going to be turned
 into two types one is Olive paste and the other is Olive stones.

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left
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only
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taken and
 they are going to be stored
 in bags with holes. Later the Olive bags will be taken
 to be pressed
 for separation. After the pressing is done
 it is going to be separated
 into two types- You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
Oil
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water
. In the final stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
Oil
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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got
 separated from the processing will be taken
 into Storage buildings for Sale.

Overall
, the process requires 10 consecutive steps for the manufacturing of Olive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 and it requires This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, container, bags, huge pressing machines to process and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready for storage and sale. 