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IN MODERN WORLD, THE IMAGE IS BECOMING A MORE POWERFUL WAY OF COMMUNICATING THAN THE WRITTEN WORD. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

IN MODERN WORLD, THE IMAGE IS BECOMING A MORE POWERFUL WAY OF COMMUNICATING THAN THE WRITTEN WORD. mWAk8
It is true that these days usage of multi media is becoming more widespread and it is considered to be more important in comparison to written word. I completely agree with this viewpoint for the reasons that it is more comprehensible, long lasting and time saving event to use visuals. To start with, because the utilization of different images is straightforward to understand, multi-medias have been widely used in a variety of situations. For example, in education teaching pupils by the methods that include variety of via graphs helps children to observe the lessons more quickly and effortlessly. In fact, the usage of pictures while learning new words by heart is more likely to stay in mind than reciting them by writing word by word. Furthermore, according to recent researches, it is clear that most people tend to be aware of the news on TV more than the newspapers meaning that visuals are much more interesting than the written words and much easier to comprehence. In addition, while communicating with the help of visual aids, people remember the things for a prolonged time, whereas words prone to last in a few minutes. For instance, if we use different kind of emojis or pictures while texting with our friends, it really express our emotion and can be stayed in the mind for a long time than texting by written words. Moreover, it helps not to squander our time which means that we spend less time when we send pictures or smiles in relation to texting. In conclusion, today most people prefer using multi-medias to using words for communicating, therefore it is considered the best way of communication.
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long lasting
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saving
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visuals.

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the utilization of
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images is straightforward to understand, multi-medias have been
widely
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used
in a variety of situations.
For example
, in education teaching pupils by the methods that include variety of via graphs
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helps
children to observe the lessons more
quickly
and
effortlessly
. In fact, the usage of pictures while learning new words by heart is more likely to stay in mind than reciting them by writing
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by
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.
Furthermore
, according to recent researches, it is
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clear
that most
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people
tend to be aware of the news on TV more than the newspapers meaning that visuals are much more interesting than the written words and much easier to
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comprehence
.

In addition
, while communicating with the
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help
of visual aids,
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people
remember the things for a prolonged
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time
, whereas words prone to last in a few minutes.
For instance
, if we
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use
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different
kind of emojis or pictures while texting with our friends, it
really
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express
our emotion and can
be stayed
in the mind for a long
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time
than texting by written words.
Moreover
, it
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helps
not to squander our
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time
which means that we spend less
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time
when we
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send
pictures or smiles in relation to texting.

In conclusion
,
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today
most
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people
prefer using multi-medias to using words for communicating,
therefore
it
is considered
the best way of communication.

IELTS academic IN MODERN WORLD, THE IMAGE IS BECOMING A MORE POWERFUL WAY OF COMMUNICATING THAN THE WRITTEN WORD.

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276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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