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How effective is advertising is at persuading us to buy things.

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Well, advertising is one of the best way to persuade goods and services to the customer. Through the advertising, customer can clearly identify what is the product, what are the ingredients, what is the quality of it so on. After knowing about the product customer usually addict to buy and consume the good. A attractive advertisements can create a stunning image about the product. Another most noticeable benefit is, the advertisements has an ability to enhance the favor of the customer to consume it. To wrap up, personally, I strongly believe advertisements can make a huge space in the market for any product. it is the major benefit for the seller.
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. Through the advertising,
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. Another most noticeable benefit is, the advertisements has an ability to enhance the favor of the
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IELTS academic How effective is advertising is at persuading us to buy things.

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2 paragraphs
111 words
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