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The graph below shows the number of undergraduate students in thousands in four countries between 1995 and 2015

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The graph illustrates the number of undergraduate students the span of 1995 and 2015 by four countries. Overall, the quantities of undergraduate students by Sweden and Austria have both almost decreased, whereas in Spain has gradually increased, till 2010 and voice versa in 2015In the beginning of period quantity of Sweden's undergraduate students was higher than Spain (approximately 350 thousands of students), yet, became slovely decreased up to end of period. On the other hand, Austrian undergraduate students had remained almost constant at about 200 thousands of students. One streaking feature, by 2010 Austria showed exponential growth approximately 300 thousands, while, Sweden showed rapidly fall up to 200 thousandsBoth 1995 and 2010 Spain showed monotonous magnification of students ( about 250 thousands and 350 thousands respectively), however it had become slovely down as far as 2015. It is also interesting to note Greece had remained with less quantity of students even if it showed erratic ascend and descend
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the span of 1995 and 2015 by four countries.
Overall
, the quantities of
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by Sweden and Austria have both almost decreased, whereas in Spain has
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increased, till 2010 and voice versa in 2015In the beginning of period quantity of Sweden's
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was higher than Spain (approximately
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On the other hand
, Austrian
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had remained almost constant at about
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200 thousands of
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. One streaking feature, by 2010 Austria
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exponential growth approximately 300 thousands, while, Sweden
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rapidly
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thousandsBoth
1995 and 2010 Spain
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monotonous magnification of
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about 250 thousands and 350 thousands
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down as far as 2015. It is
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interesting to note Greece had remained with less quantity of
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