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The figures give information about the percentage of households with internet access, computer ownership and the percentage of individuals using the Internet in different world regions in 2019.

The figures give information about the percentage of households with internet access, computer ownership and the percentage of individuals using the Internet in different world regions in 2019. rbM8L
The following table shows the average leisure time for the Someland people, organized by the hours of leisure time they spend annually. According to the figures, the single most popular leisure activity of teenagers and elderly individuals is watching television and videos. They spend their 1100 hours to 1200 hours spare time watching TV, while it ranges from 400 hours to 700 hours among others. With the increase of age, group exercise activities decrease. Participating in group exercise and sport is high in teenagers and 20s (from 350 hours to 450 hours). On the contrary, people in their 60s and 70s do not spend their free time doing it. With the increase of age, people spend less time socializing. Teenagers and people in their 20s spend around 350 hours socializing with four or more people. On the other hand, socializing with four or more people drops dramatically to 25 hours in their 50s, 60s, and 70s. People in their 30s to 70s spend from 200 hours to 350 hours socializing with four or less people. Individual exercise is more popular with people in their 30s, and 40s than teenagers. Cinema is not a popular activity in leisure time. This percentage decreases significantly among the 40s, and 50s. Overall, watching TV and videos is the most popular activity for people of all ages. The way people use their spare time depends on their age, and various generations have different ways of entertaining themselves.
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watching TV, while it ranges from 400
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