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making instant noodles in the plant

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Given is the graph providing us with information regarding the production of pre-prepared food named “noodles”. Overall, it is starkly apparent that there are eight stages that should have been undertaken in order to produce instant noodles in the factory. The process commences when the storage flour has been transported by particular trucks from silos and reservoirs to the factory. Then, in the second step, the flour will be mixed with water and oil by means of a mixer in order to prepare the monotonous dough. In the following stage, the dough by moving on the dough sheet turns into a roller. During the next phase, the roller-shaped dough will be passed through the dough strips and turned into long strips. Then these noodles strips will be transformed into noodle disks. In the stage after, noodle disks are being cooked in oil and dried. Subsequently, the cooked and dried noodles disks will be added into disposable cups which included vegetables and spice in advance. The process comes to end when the filled cups are conveyed to the label segment and they become sealed and ready for consumption.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 is the graph providing us with information regarding the production of Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-prepared
 food named “noodles”.

Overall
, it is starkly
 apparent that there are eight stages that should have been undertaken in order to produce instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 in the factory.

The process commences when the storage flour has been transported
 by particular trucks from silos and reservoirs to the factory. Then, in the second step, the flour will be mixed
 with water and oil by means of a mixer in order to prepare the monotonous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
. In the following stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 by moving on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 sheet turns into a roller. During the next
 phase, the roller-shaped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 will be passed
 through the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcabbagebreadlettuce
dough
 strips and turned into long strips. Then these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 strips will be transformed
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 disks.

In the stage after, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 disks are being cooked
 in oil and dried. Subsequently
, the cooked and dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 disks will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 into disposable cups which included vegetables and spice in advance. The process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 when the filled cups are conveyed
 to the label Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).segment, and
segment and
 they become sealed and ready for consumption. 