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How do you thing IELTS is important 7ObA

The city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. The process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. The components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. The electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The city of Possible spelling mistake found.Brand field
Brandfield
. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed
. The process that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to manufacture bricks for the building industry. The components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 pie charts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 comparisons where relevant. 

IELTS academic How do you thing IELTS is important

Academic

American English

2 paragraphs

100 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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