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The given pie chart gives information about how an average Australian household use energy and second chart reveals ec The striking feature of these charts is that, maximum energy is used by heating, but water heating emits highest greenhouse gas by an average Australian household. Taking statistical data into consideration it is quite conspicuous that, highest energy is consumed by heating, which is 42%. Whereas, water heating accounts for only 30% of energy. Followed by other appliances, which consumed only half of water heating. Cooling is least in terms of energy consumption with only 2%. It has been observed that, maximum greenhouse is emitted by water heating (32%). Followed by other appliances, which emits 28% of total house gas. In terms of greenhouse emission, refrigerator and heating emit almost equal proportion of greenhouse gas. However, lighting emits nearly half of total greenhouse which is emitted by heating. lowest greenhouse gas is emitted by cooling, which is 3%.
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water
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emits highest

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greenhouse
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gas
by an average Australian household.

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energy
is consumed


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by
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, which is 42%. Whereas,
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heating
accounts for
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30% of energy.

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heating.

Cooling is least in terms of
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by
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(32%). Followed
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other
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. In terms of
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emission, refrigerator and
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heating


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emit
almost equal proportion of
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IELTS academic how an average Australian household use energy AND how an average Australian household use energy

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  American English
10 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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