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The diagrams below show the expenditure of two technology companies of similar size in the UK in 2019.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Clairmont Limited, 2019 Recearch and Development 20%, Equipment 21%, Consultancy fees 15%, Training 8%, Employees salaries 30%, Managers salaries 6%. Bishop Limited, 2019 Research and Development 11%, Equipment 15%, Consultancy fees 9%, Training 20%, Employees salaries 9%, Managers salaries 5%

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The pie charts illustrates the expendiure pattern of two different technology company of united kingdom having same scale for the year 2019. Overall both of this companies spent their major amount of money for the salaries of their staff. Clairmont Limited spent almost 36 percent of their total buget as the salary of their employees and manager while Bisop Limited spent 45 parcent of their byget in this sector. Though Clairmont limited spent a bit less to the Bishop limited in this part of expenditure but they spent 15 parcent of their annul budget as consultancy fees whereas Bishop limited spent only 9% as consultency fees. Altogether both of this companies spent almost same amount of money for salaries and fees. Clainmont Limited Invested a remarkable amount 20% for Research and Development but Bishop limited spent almost a halfamount 11% comparing to Clairmont. Both this companies spent a handsome amount of money as the cost of equipment. For Training purpose Clairmontspent only 8% of their annul budget whereas Bishop spent more then double amount 20%. Overall it can be seen that though the basic operational cost like salaries, consultancy fees were common for both companies, but the spent differently in sectors like Reserch and Development and reaining facility which made Annul Expenditure identical.
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  • The diagrams below show the expenditure of two technology companies of similar size in the UK in 2019.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Clairmont Limited, 2019 Recearch and Development 20%, Equipment 21%, Consultancy fees 15%, Training 8%, Employees salaries 30%, Managers salaries 6%. Bishop Limited, 2019 Research and Development 11%, Equipment 15%, Consultancy fees 9%, Training 20%, Employees salaries 9%, Managers salaries 5%