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The table gives information of how many passenger vehicles, motorcycles, commercial vehicles, heavy and light trucks registered in three different years in Australia.

The table gives information of how many passenger vehicles, motorcycles, commercial vehicles, heavy and light trucks registered in three different years in Australia. nE997
The given table illustrates numerous data about enrolled different vehicles namely passengers vehicles, motorcycles, commercial transportations, and both heavy and light tracks in Australia from 2010 until 2014. Predominantly, To embark on it is readily realizable that during the period the numbers are increasing as well likewise the lighter the cars are, the more intense the number of the vehicles are declining additionally. On the contrary, the represented percentage as what has varied during the timeline is precious and vital with a positive promotion in change. To begin with, the data about passenger transportation has commenced the timeline in 11 million then boosted during the period to approximately reaching a peak at 13 million. In addition, the motorcycle segment has either done this and embarked on at 570 thousand thus ended up at 745 thousand with around 30% growth. Nevertheless, the information given about commercial vehicles are proximate to the passenger's vehicle in number and increased in 18% and had a frantic increase to start in 2, 3 million and reach a peak at 2, 7 million. On the contrary Heavy tracks in comparison to Light one´s, it is apparent that they comprise the least portion of the table thus beginning the period at 324 thousand by 2010 and figured out 423 thousand by the end of the timeline for heavy tracks nonetheless the data about light ones entails 106 thousand initially but end up ultimately in 131 thousand and possess approximately 24% increase at that time.
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in Australia from 2010 until 2014.

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