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Household Budget Allocation

Household Budget Allocation gYBr1

The pi-charts illustrate how middle-class families had distributed their spendature in two different periods. It shows that housing, foods and clothes spending increased in the expense of vacation, leisure and the other needs. In 2012, housing takes about one third of budget while half of budget divided equally between the needs " food and clothes" and leisure or vacation cost. The remaining 15% was used for other requirments. In 2015, expenditure on housing and food increased significantly and account for 85 percent of whole income. In the same time the amount of money for recreation and miscelinous need dropped down

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shows
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 and leisure or vacation cost. The remaining 15% was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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IELTS academic Household Budget Allocation

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

99 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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