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Here the table depicts the salaries of high school teachers in the year 2009.

Here the table depicts the salaries of high school teachers in the year 2009. NGl0

Here the table depicts the salaries of high school teachers in the year 2009. They have mentioned the countries and their salaries in starting, after 15 years, their maximum salaries and how many years it will take to reach maximum salary. The opening salary of Australia is 28000 while for Denmark its 45000, for Luxembourg 80000 which is comparatively much higher than others, Japan 34000 and Korea 30000 being the lowest. After 15 years it will increase to 48000, 54000, 119000, 65000, 48000 correspondingly. Again Luxembourg being highest paying nation. The maximum salary remain fixed for Australia and Denmark but it will increase for Luxembourg, japan, Korea to 132000, 86000, 62000 duly. For Australia, it will take 9 years to reach the highest savage however for Denmark it will take 8 years. For Luxembourg japan and Korea it will take a number of years to reach the peak that is 30, 37 and 34 respectively.

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 of Australia is 28000 while for Denmark its 45000, for Luxembourg 80000 which is comparatively
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 it will increase for Luxembourg, japan, Korea to 132000, 86000, 62000 duly
.

For Australia, it will take 9 years to reach the highest savage however
 for Denmark it will take 8 years. For Luxembourg japan and Korea it will take a number of years to reach the peak that is
 30, 37 and 34 respectively
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